In Critical Essays on Kingsley Amis, edited by Robert H. Bell (NY: G.K. Hall and Co, 1998), pp. 141-157.
Serio-Comic Amis and True Comic Edge: Lucky Jim and You
Cant Do Both
by Robert H. Bell
"As often in life, what had seemed nothing but a jest became a glimpse
of a large and painful truth the second time round"
-----You Cant Do Both
Rarely does comic fiction provide probing moral inquiry
or compelling psychological realism. Critics like F. R. Leavis, primarily concerned
with these qualities, deny masterpieces like Tom Jones and Tristram Shandy status
in The Great Tradition, and gifted writers like Kingsley Amis are disparaged
by John Updike as "winsomely trivial . . . in thrall to the weary concept
of the 'comic novel,' " without "true comic edge." Though I would
dearly like to repudiate Updike's position, I can only take issue with it. After
thirty years of enjoying and admiring Amis, and a career of explicating and
justifying comic writing, I must reluctantly concede the partial validity of
Updike's criticism. What I can dispute and eagerly argue is that Jim Dixon is
a comic hero with some unexpected (and, all right, strangely neglected) intricacy;
for a remarkably long time we cannot know what will become of him, nor are we
ever entirely sure how to assess him. The result is an engagingly problematic
comic novel, with moments of uproarious farce, which precipitates a measure
of thoughtful laughter and reflective scrutiny. But Lucky Jim, animated by comic
impulses and faithful to comic imperatives, has limited depth, especially compared
with Amiss more rigorously "serio-comic" late novel You Cant
Do Both. Ultimately, one of the most telling and impressive of Amis's achievements
is the discovery of humor's inadequacy, and the successful conversion of these
limits into a subject, an issue, and a resource.
Our initial responses to James Dixon are not particularly
complicated: we share his point of view and generally sympathize with him. He's
a beleaguered young man in danger of losing his job, compelled to please Professor
Welch, who is insufferably boring, inhumanly obtuse, and prone to addressing
Jim by the name of his predecessor in the History Department. Jim is likable
because he is without pretense or self-delusion. Hed be the first to admit
hes unheroic and all-too-human. Jim modestly considers that he had been
"drawn into the Margaret business by a combination of virtues he hadnt
known hed possessed: politeness, friendly interest, ordinary concern,
a good-natured willingness to be imposed upon, a desire for unequivocal friendship."
Jim wins our sympathy not by impressive character or conduct but simply because
he is better than the fools and phonies whose follies he mocks. Jim protects
himself and amuses us with satiric wit and comic defiance. He correctly describes
himself as "quick off the mark" (133). Hes a great mimic, an
inventive actor, a master of voices, expressions, and impersonations, a well
of outrageous vitality. Jim is the only live sensibility in a mausoleum of deaththe
incarnation of Bergsons elan vital, the life force pitted against stultifying
authorities, the mechanical inhumanity embodied by Professor Welch. At one point,
enjoying his plot against Bertrand, he "threw back his head and gave a
long trombone-laugh of anarchistic laughter" (103). Jims "anarchistic
laughter," mocking conventional morality and decorum, is the stock-in-trade
of comedy. Set the Marx Brothers loose in an opera house, or the brothers of
Animal House amid a civic parade, and welcome Topsy-Turvy in which exuberant
youth discombobulates venerable authority. "The pure sense of life,"
says Suzanne K. Langer, is "the underlying feeling of comedy." Such
comic energy is amusing but often excessive, infantile (Updikes phrase
is "unabashedly sophomoric"), as when Jim writes, "Ned Welch
is a Soppy Fool with a Face like a Pigs Bum" on Welchs steamy
bathroom mirror, or imagines devoting the next ten years to "working his
way to a position as art critic on purpose to review Bertrands work unfavorably"
(50).
While laughter is crucial to Jims survival and sanity, it contains more
"anarchic fury" than he realizes or controls. Here is psychological
intensity with significant implications, creating a discrepancy between Jims
self-awareness and our reaction to him. To Amis a fully-defined character is
perceived "from all points on the compass, with respect, irony, impatience,
and sadness." The narrative point-of-view in Lucky Jim is stable and reliable,
or at least stably and reliably the heros. But the viewpoint provides
more: it is just over Jims shoulder, and it dramatizes Jim thinking and
feelingthus enabling us to regard Jim with more ironic detachment and
critical skepticism than Jim himself would or could muster. The aggression we
see so often is a far more dangerous quality than, say, the high spirits or
amorous inclinations of Jims comic ancestors, Joseph Andrews and Tom Jones.
Jim can barely suppress the impulse to attack Professor Welch or Bertrand.
His favorite means of purging rage, or containing loathing, is to enact that
dazzling repertory of faces; my favorite, suggesting the Saturnalian spirit
he represents, is Jims Sex Life in Ancient Rome face. Jim acknowledges
that his imitations "frightened him." He is less aware how much self-hatred
he has: his aggression, deflected from its exterior objects, boomerangs. Some
of his capers, like stealing the cab from his senior colleague at the dance,
are reckless Kamikaze gestures, represented by Amis (but not Jim) as self-destructive.
So often is he enacting roles, performing mimicry, and making faces, that it
must confuse Jim himself, or distract him from the burden of introspection and
self-awareness. Hes certainly lax and unskilled at self-examination; he
seems happiest pretending to be someone else, impersonating people on the telephone
or forging letters. This hero, with conflicts and tensions beyond his own comprehension,
sustains a high-wire act which keeps his audience, including readers, off-balance;
his volatile energies are very funny and quite desperate.
Such anarchic qualities, by definition unpredictable, are inherently amoral.
Jim rarely stands for anything: he defines himself mainly by what he despises.
He is a contemporary descendent of the Picaro, attractive but fundamentally
mischievous and self-seeking, a rogue or what Amis would term a bit of a bastard.
We indulge the rascal, perhaps, to the extent that we recognize our own infantile,
libidinal, unsocialized impulses. Yet under scrutiny his character is bound
to cause confusion and consternation. He is ludicrous and likable, so smart
and such a smart-ass, objectionable yet admirable, heedless yet life-affirming.
Marvelously protean, he is elusively ambiguous. Consider again Jims meditations
on the "Margaret business." Jims catalog of qualities which
got him into the relationship is accurate but incomplete. It omits rather less
appealing qualities one might just as readily attribute to Jim, such as cowardice,
passivity, timidity. He often behaves unscrupulously, in ways that may provoke
both amusement and "impatience," to recall that key point on the Amis
narrative compass.
Even Jims ironic self-appraisal, normally a winning trait, is highly disorienting,
as when he considers the title of his article: "It was the perfect title,
in that it crystallized the articles niggling mindlessness, its funereal
parade of yawn-enforcing facts, the pseudo-light it threw upon non-problems"
(16). For living without illusion, Jim surely gets full marks, but he veers
beyond candor and humor toward self-abuse. His assault upon sham and pretense
includes self-loathing and Philistinism, what we might term the Filthy Mozart
Factor, to commemorate the moment Jim hears somebody in the bath singing "some
skein of untiring facetiousness by filthy Mozart." Jims impertinence
and antipathy to culture illustrate the way his satiric assaults rebound upon
himself.
To say this is to stress that Jim is not merely the center of value and the
voice of the satirist but the object of humorous and substantial evaluation.
Here, for example, he fends off his ardent student Michie, the veteran intrigued
by scholasticism, whatever that is: "Clearly, the more students, within
reason, Dixon could get interested in his subject, the better for
him; equally clearly, too large a number of interested students
would mean that the number studying Welchs own special subject would fall
to a degree that Welch might be expected to resent. With an honours class of
nineteen and a department of six, three students seemed a safe number to try
for. So far Dixons efforts on behalf of his special subject, apart from
thinking how much he hated it, had been confined to aiming to secure for it
the three prettiest girls in the class, one of whom was Michies girl,
while excluding from it Michie himself. Added to Dixons dislike of thinking
about work at all, the necessity of keeping Michie at arms length went far to
explain his present discomfort" (30).
Delineating Jims comic discomfort, as in many other moments of half-probing
introspection, the narrator says nothing, strictly speaking, Jim doesnt
know and wouldnt admit. Yet even while adhering rigorously to Jims
perspective, the narrative viewpoint implicitly demands critical response. Through
such revelations, Amis exposes the hero as expedient, cynical, manipulative,
and lazy. Jims moral nature is not merely "winsomely trivial"
but deeply equivocal. He is part victim but he isnt necessarily more sinned
against than sinning, for he is also and often maker of his own muddles. The
pattern is established early, when Jim regrets the "bad impression"
hed first made at the University by "his having inflicted a superficial
wound on the professor of English in the first week [who] had been standing
on the front steps when Dixon, coming round the corner from the library, had
kicked violently at a small round stone lying on the macadam . . .[which] had
struck the other just below the left kneecap" (18). Characteristically,
Jim expressed some violent, vague hostility which backfires; he partly invites
or precipitates his troubles. The reason he was drafted to sing madrigals at
the Welchs party, and was mortified, is that he lied when he said he could
"read music after a fashion " (38). Jim is stuck in the
wrong role without the courage to repudiate it or the dignity to transcend it.
"Hed never be able to tell Welch what he wanted to tell him, any
more than hed ever be able to do the same with Margaret" (86).
There is psychological intensity, or "true comic edge," in the serious
nature of Jims fears: because we know that his psyche is crippled and
vulnerable, we cannot rely upon a happy ending. As his plight is problematic,
his progress is genuinely suspenseful, replete with real perils, so that we
hang upon events, hopeful but doubtful: Amis concocts comedy from traditional
ingredients in a modern mix. In Joseph Andrews, Fielding plays with the possibility
of disaster when, for example, he addresses the anxieties the reader "must
have felt on the account of poor Fanny, whom we left in so deplorable a condition
. . . wondering what happened to that beautiful and innocent virgin, after she
fell into the wicked hands of the captain." Even describing the imminent
peril of rape, Fieldings tone reassures us that the danger is exaggerated,
the virgin inviolate, protected (in a phrase he uses elsewhere) "by the
deity who presides over chaste love." Fielding, of course, is that benevolent
Deity, maintaining providential design and comic suspense. His blend of cheer
and fright is beautifully counterpointed but always inclined toward humor, because
the dangers are treated melodramatically and with cavalier insouciance. We do
not read far in Fielding without realizing that he always guarantees virtue
and never irreparably harms his favorites. We learn to anticipate a pattern
of apparent catastrophes and hairs-breadth 'scapes, to recognize hyperbolic
fears or parodies of danger as comic analogs of fear. Above all, we can trust
our omnipotent, ubiquitous narrator; the suspense is ultimately not if but how
Fielding will bring his beloved hero and innocent heroine through the storms
to the happy shore.
Lucky Jim contrives a similar but distinct synthesis, a modern version of Fieldings
melodramatic perils. Amiss alternation of reassurance or equanimity and
dread or suspense cuts deeper, and leaves us far less certain of deliverance
than Fieldings reader. Unlike Fielding, Amis does not flaunt his power,
enter the stage directly, or show off. He is more like the tactfully withdrawn
narrator of modernist fiction, in the Flaubertian phrase of Stephen Daedalus,
"aloof, absent, paring his fingernails." Relatively abandoned or bereft
of avuncular narrative protection, Jim Dixon appears to be the prey of fickle
fortune, not the favorite of comic destiny. The third-person limited point-of-view
gives us Jims plucky pessimism, and no warrant for believing he is lucky
at all; given his confused travail, Jim would be surprised to learn the title
of his adventures. Cued by the title, the reader suspects and probably hopes
that Jim will survive and prosper. Yet as a result of the narrative reticence
and authorial deftness, the providential tendency of Amis's comedy is barely
discernible, only invisibly, subtly steering the hero toward more luck than
he can imagine.
The open-ended uncertainty of the romantic triangle illustrates the deft comic
plotting. Until remarkably late in the novel, the limited omniscience of the
narrative viewpoint and Jims exaggerated sense of his hopelessness give
us little authoritative assurance that Jim will get rid of the wrong girl and
get hold of the right one. Amis conveys the grand illusion that events are determined
by character rather than designed as we like it. It is another maskapparent
contingency disguising ultimate design. Jim is initially and apparently endlessly
involved in a bloodless liaison to which he musters only intermittent passive
resistance: "suddenly hed become the man who was going round
with Margaret, and somehow competing with" a rival named Catchpole. Margaret,
recovering from a half-baked suicide attempt, is just plausible and pathetic
enough to command Jims attentions. Yet his feelings toward her are thoroughly
vague and utterly confused: compassion, irritation, evasiveness, little desire.
Plain and priggish, she addresses Jim as "Poor James." His drunken
advances, at first zealously reciprocated, are abruptly rebuffed, an indication
that her feelings are as tepid or ambivalent as his. The next morning, feeling
resentful, her response to Jims dilemma with the bedspread ruined by his
cigarette, is sternly censorious, the voice of an aunt or librarian, not a sweetheart.
Her reproaches resonate, and precipitate two familiar feelings in Jim, panic
and guilt. Yet somehow Jim, under a kind of wicked spell, is drawn further into
bondage to Margaret, manipulated into escorting her to the dance. Even when
he makes his daring exit with Christine, he says grimly that Margaret "has
a real claim on me, you know."
Though Jims escape sparks a frightful row with Margaret, he still cannot
bail out. Arguing furiously, she reveals her true colors: "You dont
think Christine would have you, do you? A shabby little provincial bore like
you!" (158). She falls into hysterics and Jim, realizing that Margaret
can still exploit his decency and weakness, sinks into bleak depression. He
perceives but cant address a flaw in his character, passive acquiescence
to manipulators like Margaret and Professor Welch (who are of course warm friends).
It takes Jim an inordinately long time to realize that he is "well schooled
in giving apologies at the very times he ought to be demanding them" (174);
in this important regard, Jim resembles his literary cousin Robin Davies in
You Can't Do Both. Jim remains something of a schlemiel, fearful, estranged,
terrified that he wont know what to do in the company of quality. Like
the classic Picaro, he is the perpetual outsider or marginal figure, but without
the traditional rogues poised mastery.
So not simply his situation but his limitations make Jim an unlikely hero, romantic
or otherwise. His first meeting with Christine is unpromising: she appears as
Bertrands companion at the Welchs arty weekend, and arouses powerful,
contrary responses in Jim: desire, alarm, and anger that he cant have
such attractive women. When he dances with Christine at the ball, he is nearly
unmanned by apprehension: "he found it hard to believe that she was really
going to let him touch her, or that the men near them wouldnt spontaneously
intervene to prevent them" (117). Yet ever since they met, there have been
dimly perceptible omens, such as Christine grinning in comic complicity with
Jim when they both remake his bed with the ruined spread. Again what the narrator
withholds is crucial, for without an omniscient Fielding to guide us, the signals
remain wonderfully mixed. Since the characters dont know what they want
or should do, we cant guess what will happen. In one breath Christine
praises Jims impersonation of a reporter, in which he gulls Bertrand,
as "brilliantly funny," then regrets seeming to be in a "conspiracy
to get the better of Bertrand" (119). As in classical comedies like Tom
Jones, A Midsummer Nights Dream or Pride and Prejudice, the characters
unwittingly form discernible dance like or minuet patterns.
Hope and Dread remain finely balanced until quite late in the novel. Given Jims
malaise and uncertainty, failure seems more likely than success. He drifts back
to Margaret, "directed by something outside of himself . . . not out of
any willing on his part" (186). He and Christine meet, each prepared to
renounce the other. As late as chapter nineteen, four-fifths of the way through
the novel, Jims dreams remain far-fetched if not inconceivable. His only
solace is a gradual clarification of his own weaknesses: "Im sticking
to Margaret," he tells Christine, "because I havent the guts
to turn her loose . . . So I do that instead of doing what I want to do, because
Im afraid to" (201).
As late as Jims tour de farce, the Merry England lecture, his prospects
with Christine remain highly dubious. He helplessly watches Bertrand "with
his hand on Christines arm, confident, proprietary, victorious" (219).
The reader has no way of knowing whats in Christines mind and can
only pity "Poor James," whose "spirits were so low that he wanted
to lie down and pant like a dog: jobless, Christineless, and now grand-slammed
in the Margaret game" (220). Not until the very last scene, improbable
but plausible, can we perceive that comic destiny has, all along, been disguised
as fickle fortune. As Carol Goldsmith says, in another context, "its
all connected, all connected." Even the Professors notoriously terrible
driving, which early in the novel puts Jim at real risk, enables the comic and
romantic denouement.
Another way Amis makes Jims ultimate good luck utterly unexpected yet
realistically acceptable is by deploying Gore-Urquhart as the comic deus ex
machina. Notice that even in the crucial phone call, when Gore-Urquhart offers
Jim the coveted job, we do not lose sight of the heros unimposing stature:
"Its not that youve got the qualification for this or any work
. . . You havent the disqualifications, though, and thats much rarer"
(234). As Gore-Urquhart humorously underscores, Jim only more or less deserves
such good fortuneyet comic destiny has decreed that our hero, bad as he
is, shall live happily ever after. Like Tom Jones or Joseph Andrews along the
way to the promised land, Jim makes unremarkable, indeed quite slight progress.
Like most comedy, Lucky Jim depends upon a series of recognitions rather than
dramatic revelations. These recognitions fall into two categories: facts and
self-discoveries.
The recognition of facts, or a more lucid apprehension of the way things are,
comes gradually but regularly to Jims consciousness. Some of these facts
are crucial to his understanding of other characters, such as his discovery
of Bertrand and Carol Goldsmith in a compromising situation. This of course
makes it ethically easier for us to applaud Jims efforts to steal Christine
from Bertand, exposed as a two-timing hypocrite, as well as a pompous ass. Another
important fact is Carols speculation, later corroborated, that Christine
hasnt yet been abed with Bertrand: like Fieldings Fanny and Sophia,
she is inviolate, certified innocent and pure for the hero.
Another fact in the cascade of comic recognitions, as crucial as the glad tidings
of the Pedlar in Joseph Andrews or the Lawyer Dowling in Tom Jones, is Catchpoles
testimony regarding Margarets sham suicide. The revelation of her deep
neuroses liberates Jim from the strictures of his conscience and the bondage
of their relationship. "Dont try to help her any more," says
Catchpole, more helpfully than he could know, "its too dangerous
for you. I know what Im talking about. She doesnt need any help
either, you know, really. The best of luck to you" (242). Helpful, hopeful,
virtually a benediction. Although there is an opposite possibility, almost equally
strong, which illustrates the continuing complexity of evaluation. One might
conclude that a staged suicide indicates profound problems that deserve sympathy,
respect, and patience rather than impatience, irony, and self-protection.
The second category of recognitions in comedy, self-discovery, is considerably
murkier than the discovery of plain truths. Compared to Tom Jones and Joseph
Andrews, Jim is much more self-aware and complicated; he is too reflective,
pained, and internal to be described as a flat comic character. Yet like Tom
and Joseph, Jims character remains relatively fixed, incapable of radical
transformation. He experiences a modicum of self-discovery, gradually enhanced
comprehension of himself and his world. Marking his limited progress is his
final gesture, a "howl of laughter" at the Welch family, for the things
he has learned delight, but they dont instruct all that much, and wont
take him much beyond gleeful victory, and never into what Yeats termed the "abyss
of self." Jim remains for better and for worse a comic hero in a comic
novel, with keener perceptions and vague development. He has understood the
need to leave Margaret and abandon academics, neither of which will prove painful.
Jim has learned that he neednt be so timid, so afraid to approach a girl
like Christine just because "shes a bit out of my class."
A conversation with Carol Goldsmith at the dance illustrates the fundamentally
comic qualities and limits of Jims growth. When he confesses his fear
of approaching Christine, she tells him to grow up, stop apologizing, and seize
the day. Wiser and more cynical, Carol gives Jims mission half-facetious,
half-serious sanction, and repeats it for emphasis: "Youve got a
moral duty to perform." For once Jim is invited to do something he wants
to do and to feel good about it, which is a comic if not often realistic opportunity,
a pleasant development, not to be confused with "moral duty." Jim
is stunned to hear that Carol had informed her husband about her affair with
Bertrand, and reflects "that he knew absolutely nothing whatsoever about
other people or their lives" (123). Thus our hero remains in need of rather
basic lessons fundamental to fiction and life. He has become luckier and a bit
less pathetic and callow without becoming much more mature or even much less
naive.
By the end of the story, Jim has not developed far enough, strictly speaking,
to merit his cornucopia of luck. The book knows this and contains more comic
wisdom than the hero attains: Jims experience illustrates some his favorite,
vitally comic, and only modestly penetrating, credos: "Nice things are
nicer than nasty ones," and "Doing what you want to do is the only
training for doing more of what you want to do." The comic closure of Lucky
Jim fulfills wishes but does not measure merit. The discovery of some facts
and simple truths brings fantasy and reality closer, in a sense, as when Jim
thinks and says out loud the same insult, terming Bertrand a "bloody old
towser-faced boot-faced totem-pole on a crap reservation." As David Lodge
observes, from this instant when "thought and speech, the inner and outer
world coincide," things "start to go right for Jim." Language
has amazing capacity: recognizing and designating the truth miraculously transforms
self and world into something better.
In the world of Lucky Jim, overseen by an invisible but benevolent deity, whose
requirements are lenient and standards generous, such divinations are perhaps
sufficient. Jim remains relatively superficial in his ethical growth, even though
his character is far from simple. And though Lucky Jim is hardly trivial in
its "psychological intensity," the novel does not test its protagonist
deeply but rewards him in accordance with more purely comic imperatives. The
denouement is a pleasing gesture toward comic justice. But it rewards Jim for
comic energy and resilience rather than for any more profoundly ethical attributes.
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Tempted as he must have been to repeat the winning ways of Lucky Jim, Amis never
exactly rebottled its champagne mirth, which he found inadequate for the kinds
of investigastions he wished to pursue. Many of his best novels have sharper
edges and deeper stakes, without "evangelical huffing and puffing,"
but with more sustained exploration of ethics, and a sense of comedy's limited
ability to treat the problems. By the end of his career, when he wrote You Cant
Do Both, Amis had mastered serio-comic inquiry significantly different from
his first novel, all the more so because the links with Lucky Jim are so evident.
Robin Davies, the protagonist of You Cant Do Both, resembles Jim Dixon
yet becomes a more complicated character with a curious fate. As the story begins,
the fourteen-year-old Robin lives in a modest South London suburb, excels at
school, and copes gamely with his fathers policy of "round-the-clock
chaperonage." Any mild transgression provokes paternal ire and a stern
reprimand. Robin regularly accepts blame and apologizes grudgingly. Deflated,
bullied into outward submission, he invents interior monologues where he triumphs
or at least vents his anger. As with Lucky Jim, we are situated inside or just
above the consciousness of a hero whose plucky wit and vital energies enable
his encounters with objectionable authorities. Both novels compel sympathy for
a restless, put-upon hero with exceptionally sensitive, accurate Boredom and
BS Detectors, yet permit or invite more critical assessment of only partially
"authorized" figures. If Jim Dixon is a lovable rascal who gets his
just deserts with an extra helping, Robin Davies is an appealing, engaging youth
who always wants to eat and to have his cake. Yet Robin is regarded by nearly
everyone who knows him as a self-seeking egoist, and is treated rather less
tenderly than Jim Dixon by Providential Design. Lucky Jim rewards comic values
and scarcely considers the limits of comedy; You Cant Do Both tests comic
values and becomes a compelling serio-comedy. Initially Robin seems unexceptionablelike
Jim, the source rather than the object of critical inquiry. He is highly intelligent,
with normal adolescent yearnings and resentments: hes a hard-up hero facing
various obstacles, some reasonable, some arbitrary. This conventionally comic
situation produces increasingly somber developments. The heros wants,
needs, and conduct are examined much more rigorously than they were in Lucky
Jim, and evaluation becomes more intriguingly problematic, most conspicuously
in the sexual sphere.
For a long while, Robin appears blameless, exploring, experimenting, and blundering,
guilty of nothing more than ordinary horniness and callowness. We enjoy the
comedy of Eros, as when Robin contemplates a female Oxford student, "half-way
up Category 2, that comprising girls it would be jolly nice/perfectly all right
to find yourself in bed with but not worth serious trouble to get them there"
(81). Indicating availability, she catapults to Category 1. Yet in Robins
more interior, conflictive personality, sex causes disturbances and precipitates
reflections that cut deeper than in Jim Dixons amusing yearnings. Pondering
sex, Robins language becomes more sinewy, a convoluted sin-tax, doubling
back upon itself, conveying ambivalence and confusion. Robins introspection
causes us simultaneously to like and distrust him, and gradually to assess him
more critically. Like Jim Dixon, Robin has appealing comic bravado and carefree
self-regard, but what was disconcerting in Jim becomes more worrisome in Robin.
When Robin meets Nancy Bennett, for example, he instantly categorizes her (I-B,
beautiful complexion and a perfectly adequate though not quite distinguished
bosom): "Robin hoped very much to get into a position soon where a decent
chap would have to keep reminding himself that, hang it all, the girl was still
not yet eighteen years old" (96).
You Cant Do Both challenges Robins humorously self-indulgent point-of-view
through several sterner commentators. His old mate Embleton lectures Robin:
"A piece of you agrees with me that Nancy isnt the right sort of
girl for you to persuade to follow your confounded intentions or whatever they
are. What Ive been saying is designed to strengthen that piece and do
some damage to the other piece, the one that says its all right to go
after something you want if you really want it" (97-98). Embletons
cautionary note sounds valid: maybe its not always all right to go after
something you want simply because you really want it. Were prodded into
regarding the hero not merely as a comic rascal with a license to fool, for
the hero of You Cant Do Both lives, more than Jim Dixon, in range of ethical
stricture, where there are substantial implications to conduct, some more nasty
than nice.
Nancy is quite obviously a nice girl, the kind to marry. Her blushing sincerity
fills Robin with "transient compunction" (wonderful phrase), and makes
him "slightly uneasy" (127). With such a heroine, the male penile
project, generally condoned if not sanctioned in comedy, gives pause. Unlike
the girls in Lucky Jim, Nancy has a family history and concerned parents. Her
Dad is another Welshman of the old school with decided views, self-dramatizing
rhetoric, and the traditional, unenviable role of Blocking Force frustrating
the heros amorous pleasures: "if I find youve trifled with
her affections, to use a pompous but expressive phrase, I shall be greatly upset
and also very cross with you indeed" (104).
Even more difficult to dismiss or mock is the anguished Mrs Bennett, who informs
Robin that Nancys older sister Megan has an illegitimate child. But Robin,
intent on his pursuit, only considers how this "would affect him"
and entertains a fleeting fantasy of contacting Fallen Sister Meagan, "who
sounded more and more like the very thing he was looking for" (107). Though
Robin is not a heartless cad, he stirs himself to combat with rakish aphorisms:
"for every second not spent in driving or dragging a given female towards
bed, you were going to have to put in an extra minute later on" (100) and
"liking them got in the way" (101).
It is easier in You Can't Do Both than in Lucky Jim to respect the voices of
authority. Here is an exchange between Robin and Mr Davies: "Is it your
intention to marry little Miss Nancyis it Bennett?"
"Yes, meaning yes it is Bennett. As regards the rest of it, isnt
it a bit early in the game to start talking about my intentions?" "Robin,
please, it is no game." "I only mean . . ." "If you treat
it as a game its my duty to inform you that youre in for a rude
awakening, my lad." "Sorry, Dad, I expressed myself badly. I assure
you I regard it as a very serious matter indeed" (117). We should not be
distracted by the old duffers archaic idiom or his incessant insistence
that this matter, whatever it is, "deserves to be treated rather more seriously
than you show signs of doing" (122). Like Nancys Dad, Robins
Dad is tiresome but not foolish, and should be heeded: "Nancy is a good
. . .girl, and I suggest to you its in your own interest that you pay
due heed to that fact, which in my view it is."
One must continually distinguish Robins viewpoint from that of the narrator
and regularly contemplate the adequacy of all perspectives, bumptious hero,
blocking forces, and elusive narrator: "Again, Robin thought himself equal
to paying heed to things unaided, but this time he said as if he meant it, I
promise you thats something Ill never be fool enough to let myself
forget" (119). Much virtue in an If. Some, at leastbut not enough,
for Robin proves unequal to the task, and foolishly (his word) forgets his promise
and violates his responsibility. Responsibility is mans estate, as it
was not in Lucky Jim, where we excuse Jim for concluding that nice things are
nicer than nasty ones and "Doing what you want to do is the only training
for doing more of what you want to do."
Though Jim Dixons comic credos dont survive the more demanding climate
of You Cant Do Both, the results are oddly serio-comic, more disorienting
than the relatively straightforward Lucky Jim. We would be mistaken, I think,
to judge too quickly or harshly Robins unwillingness to pay more heed.
In virtually every way, as a son, friend, and student, Robin is truly a good
lad, with sensitivity and mostly decent motives; hes far more likely than
Jim Dixon to repudiate his own gestures and sentiments as "false, insincere"
(120). He recognizes Nancys admirable unsuitability for a sexual fling.
"It could not be, he was sure, that he regarded her physically with less
than irreproachable carnality, most of the time at least. But at certain other
times . . ." (109). The thrust and retreat of the language, the note of
male dominance ("irreproachable carnality"), and the ultimate ellipsis
indicate both the extent and the limits of Robins introspection.
Its only in the romantic arena that his self-assertion requires correction.
Robins inner jests are jarring, as when Nancy apologies for talking about
her parents: "Robin would sooner have heard about Nancys detailed
plans for a career in indecent films. . . these family chronicles . . . seemed
to lead further away from the life of inventive fornication his fantasies designed
for her" (129). Our laughter is uneasy or guilty because we are made more
mindful that getting what you want isnt an innocent enterprise. Soon enough,
Robin makes the most of an unexpected break from parental presence, only to
be confronted, unmanned, coerced into confession and of course apology by his
father, who is heavy-handed but not altogether preposterous in underscoring
"the question of [Robins] responsibility in this mess" (137).
Robins vision is inadequate, blinkered.
In this comedy manqué, the Blocking Forces are not Straw Men, like Professor
Welch or Fieldings Squire Western, but substantial, with serious purpose,
imploring Robin to take intimacy seriously. Whats fascinating is how You
Cant Do Both never simplifies but repeatedly complicates our perceptions.
Robins older brother George is another reasonably reliable figure challenging
Robins motives yet open to challenge himself. Many voices are enabled,
none is sanctioned. "Whereas," George says, "your intention at
this stage of your life is to engage in an indefinite series of fornications
and youll think about the next stage in your life when you come to it"
(147). " Its just, well, you can understand, George, I want
to keep my options open as long as I' Robins "attempt at self-justification
was misguided," says the narrator, but its unclear whether that means
wrong or merely unsuccessful. "George said with renewed annoyance, Yeah,
youve always been a great one for keeping those buggers open. I can remember
when you were about twelve, not saying whether you were coming to the pictures
or not till the last moment in case you got a more attractive offer from somewhere.
Good old O. O. Davies Dad used to call you, standing for Options Open
" (220). People Robin encounters and trusts continually express irritation
with his self-seeking, sometimes with more chagrin than seems warranted, except
in the vexed area of sexual relations. Certainly we never saw young Robin behaving
as frivolously as George remembers and can hardly imagine that boy crossing
his Dad.
As in Lucky Jim but with richer complexity and more confusion there is tension
between comic license and ethical compunctions. It is never easy to determine
how severely to judge Robin, nor to calculate how bad he should feel. More so
than in Lucky Jim evaluation is irresistible but tricky and troublesome. Robin
exists around the muddy middle, neither one of Amiss bastard-heroes nor
a simply appealing young man. He fights a losing battle with desire, that least
vicious of sins, but still one of the seven deadly: "he deeply wanted not
to be the sort of man who, when just getting into his stride with a satisfactory
love-affair, nevertheless seriously contemplates getting started on another,"
he meditates. "Unfortunately, at other times or even at the same time,
that was just the sort of man he at least as deeply wanted to be. It had even
occurred to him that sticking firmly to one girl could be unethically used to
obtain exemption from the sometimes grueling task of promiscuity" (149).
Here Robin, humorously playing a shell game with ethical concerns and humorous
needs, caps a sentence with seeming sanction which boomerangs or ricochets out
of Robins control and beyond his ken.
The first two sections of You Cant Do Both sympathetically depict Robin
at fourteen and at nineteen. The third section dramatizes Robin five years later,
near the end of World War II. Robin has served in the armed forces, refuses
to exaggerate his travail as a POW, indeed, continues to be perfectly agreeable:
a good mate, kind to his super Mum, dutiful to his duty-minded Dad, and still
intimately linked to Nancy. Now, though, his romantic activities are evaluated
more often and stringently than ever. Jeremy Carpenter, the gay older friend
who had seemed so glamorous, sounds older and wiser. Hes been incarcerated
for refusing military service and again for some homosexual encounter. Now Jeremy
views his youthful ideology of liberation, "all that sacredness of desire
stuff," as shallow propaganda, "though it might have encouraged you
to do what you felt like doing and to hell with other people, thats if,"
he adds tellingly, "you needed encouragement" (159). Subdued by suffering,
Jeremy now questions "wanting something that by definition its impossible
to have" (284), sarcastically termed "Good advice for eleven-year-olds,
do what you want" (289).
Robins main problem remains effectively his only problem: he wants sexual
adventure and emotional security but as he has long been told and as adults
are supposed to know, you cant have both. In pure comedy, such fun and
games take place far from the law courts and church bells; in You Cant
Do Both such antics are not licensed freedom. More like Pip in Great Expectations
than like Tom Jones, Robin is highly sensitive to criticism, especially from
family, and excessively guilt-ridden, increasingly living not in The House of
Mirth but The House of Sorrow, where mortals sicken and suffer, stumble and
fall.
Robin continues to be a much more sensitive, solicitous son than lover. Brother
George again berates him for failing to marry Nancy to which he reacts with
fluent self-justification. When Nancy becomes pregnant, Robin reassures Nancy
that he wont let her down "ever." The narrative commentary is
crucial: "Robin meant everything he had said in his promise to Nancy. He
was greatly encouraged by the readiness with which she had believed him, thinking
it went to show that when he was being honest his honesty shone through."
But then the Robin Davies two-step, simultaneously winning regard for
Robins candor and exposing his continuing callowness: "It was only
later that he saw the force of the rider to that proposition, namely that when
he was being dishonest his dishonesty must shine through as pellucidly."
And a not quite saving grace: "Not that he could at the moment foresee
any need for successful dishonesty, he just knew enough about life or about
himself by this time to be reasonably sure one would be along soon" (199).
A bit of fun comes along soon enough, inevitably, on Robins radar screen,
at Dads cremation, in the cheering presence of Cousin Dilys, married,
in London, and still eager for some dilly-dally. Robins "spark of
irresponsibility" (210), charming but disquieting in a youth, is more ominous
and egregious in an adult. Like a resilient, supple, and irresponsible comic
hero, Robin absorbs shocks, which in more serious characters might catalyze
change and growth. Instead, he carries on, with no signs of pleasure or indications
of sadness. He hears but shakes off Georges reproaches, just as he is
sensitive enough to be staggered by a vision of "something sharp cutting
through Nancys flesh" (231), "but only for a short time."
In the long night before Nancys operation, Robin, considering his two
possibilities to marry or abandon her, thinks, "the second was not unthinkable
in the least, it was as thinkable as anything he had ever thought, but that
was as far as it went" (245). Robins persistent irresponsibility
seems triumphant, greased by self-sophistry: as "everybody else would fervently
have agreed, he was almost an ideal non-husband for Nancy, being selfish, self-indulgent,
lazy, arrogant, and above all inextinguishably promiscuous by nature" (245).
But some self-reproach is also self-evasion. Robins key concern is that
marriage and children "would be no fun for anybody," certainly not
Options Open Davies.
Nancys anguish just before the surgical abortion provokes a jumble of
feelings, "some he knew now he had been trying with fair success not to
acknowledge, others of whose existence he had been altogether unaware."
He decides to rescue her. Robin is neither romantic hero nor dastardly bastard.
Despite the hairs breadth scape, You Cant Do Both doesnt
conclude with romantic/comic redemption. The champagne they drink to celebrate
their engagement is cheap station stuff, while Robins "cheerio"
toast is even flatter. "There," Robin comments. "What more can
I say," to which Nancy replies forlornly, "Nothing I suppose"
(254).
Neither Robins brother nor mother can be simply celebratory. Mum confesses
that she is "a wee bit disappointed" (261) that Robin didnt
manage affairs better. The Bennetts are disappointed that their daughter is
marrying a boy who turns out to be "nothing but a common seducer"
(262), "the kind of man who thinks only of his own pleasure" (265).
Robin is not as he protests a "libertine like in Restoration comedy"
(265)--but hes not particularly admirable. Smart enough to know that hes
"missed something indefinably important through lack of curiosity, lack
of attention" (263), hes not wise enough to identify what he lacks
nor quite sure what it means to have it.
We get a sharper image of what Robin is missing when Georges wife berates
him for failing to tell Nancy he loves her: "You stupid bugger" (269).
Robins response is classic Amis humor which helps us see more clearly
how You Cant Do Both differs from Lucky Jim: "It occurred to Robin
. . . that all talk of a male militia, of men spontaneously uniting in defence
of their interests against the encroaching female, misrepresented the situation.
Men operated something like a confused, poorly armed guerrilla-type rabble;
women, in comparison, ran a highly trained, superbly equipped SS panzer corps
complete with parachute brigade and grenadier back-up." The zest, the rich
detail, the energy, so reminiscent of Lucky Jim are nearly irresistible, so
hilariously cocksure that we might almost overlook the aptness of the sister-in-laws
reproach.
In You Cant Do Both, witty formulations don't compensate for shallow emotions.
Robin hasnt troubled himself with Nancys parents who "had never
been much fun" (272) which is true but irrelevant. He could happily do
without them forever, "But then of course there were Nancys feelings
to be considered. Rather dully, but not unwillingly, he tried to imagine a future
state of consciousness in which someone elses feelings, in this case his
wifes, would seem to him as important and immediate as his own" (273).
He tries, sometimes, half-heartedly but dully, to imagine a feeling which comes
more naturally to some husbands. Indeed, Mums most effective point, trying
to persuade the Bennetts to attend their daughters wedding, is to lay
all blame squarely on her boy. "Look after number one, thats all
you can trust him to do" (275). Later Robin remarks that he knows she didnt
mean all those terrible things. "I didnt say I didnt mean it,
dear, I said I was sorry I had to say it. You must know yourself it was true"
(276). Its as though Mum sadly agrees with George that Robin hasnt
bloody well grown up and damn well should. Though he marries Nancy and even
remembers to tell her he loves her, "he soon stopped focusing on the two
of them and went back to the one of him" (277). Pondering the many reasons
for sticking to Nancy and putting her first always, he also remembers "the
million or so bad reasons for not doing so all the time" (278), the girls
with whom he might have lots more fun.
You Cant Do Both becomes progressively grittier and grimmer. Life is evidently
no laughing matter. Robins Mum drops dead, and though the doctor assures
Robin that he has no need to reproach himself, he feels otherwise: he "would
never be free of that shadow of guilt" (281). Why might Robin feel guilty?
Only, I think, if he is displacing the guilt he should feel about Nancy toward
Mum. Hes disappointed his parents not by being an unkind or unruly son
but by not reliable person and faithful husband.
Comedies often end before or at the wedding because it is difficult to sustain
humorous carefreeness or carelessness after marriage and children. A coda to
Robin's saga, set nine years later, illuminates the quality of Robin's marriage,
but the nature of the resolution is far from the comforting comic closure of
Lucky Jim. Robin is now 35, a successful Classics don, with hopes of an Oxford
fellowship, married to Nancy, and the father of two daughters. Eyeing his students
"tits," as he says, he sounds unrepentantly adolescent. Home life
is interrupted by a mysterious lady phone caller, whom Robin parries with phone
antics worthy of Jim Dixon. More than casually, Robin resembles Jim, especially
enacting "a vigorous silent routine of obscene gestures involving most
of the top half of his body and accompanied by the pulling of hideous faces.
This sequence he performed every morning in term-time or nearly" (290).
Like Jim, Robin overflows with anxieties and animosities; but unlike Jim, Robin
is a middle-aged man, with a successful career and a family, and without constant
humiliation to fuel and justify his aggression.
We learn without too much surprise that Robin leads a busy secret life. That
mysterious caller is a sexual liaison gone sour, now "an unacceptable security
risk. Over the years," Robin "had got quite good at applying the closure"
(295). Nancy doesnt know that Robin regularly pursues "his former
naughty life" (297), "screwing around whenever an opportunity came
along provided it had good tits, goodish anyway, and a face to match. Meaning
no known case of anything that could have been called self-restraint on his
part" (297). Amiss precision is devastating: "provided it had"
and "no known case" telling us all we need to know about Robins
sexual egotism.
Robin sees himself through a glass darkly, without introspecting deeply or progressing
substantially. He will not agonize for long "over what was no more than
a few harmless bits of fun," but proceeds with a "grim determination
not to let a bagatelle like a hurried marriage interfere with what he had always
done or at least wanted to do" (298). Thus Robin visits London for a nice
spot of adultery with dear old Cousin Dilys, good fun for a bit, but then hard
cheese on Robin. Nancy finally catches Robin virtually in flagrante. Robins
tears are, for what its worth, sincere. "Im sorry," he
says yet again," no excuses, just me being a shit" (303). The problem
remains that we cant know what his tears are worth, and apparently neither
does he. Yet Robin finds a convincing or at least efficacious way to say he
is sorry and seems to mean it: "For a moment he was afraid that he really
would die, and then he wondered whether that might not be best after all"
(305). Nancy consents to try again under different rules, one we know from the
title page. He can have his family, or he can pursue other women. "Not
both" (305). He accepts her terms, and instead of kissing him, Nancy punches
him, leaving Robin with a black eye, a whiskey and soda, and altered plans,
if not a changed heart.
Its a distinctly discomfiting conclusion, suggesting a continuing competition
between apologia and confession, and indicating the tendencies, reach, and restrictions
of Amis's art. We never see the effects of Robins philandering: the awkward
lies, the lonely wife, the needy children, the messy, transient, and loveless
liaisons. Robin has behaved callously and heedlessly without apparent consequence
or cost untilfinally--he is exposed and revealed for what he really is.
Yet Nancy forgives him, with scant reason to believe any reformation is likely,
and plenty of reason to suspect that he will always be as he has always been.
We're troubled not by the mere absence of blustering, or huffing and puffing,
but by the narrowness of what Amis makes real, substantial, and significant.
In muffling the impact of Robin's faithlessness and crediting the sincerity
of his regrets, the novel not only avoids judgment of his misconduct, but averts
serious consideration of its meaning.
We've seen that You Cant Do Both
does not treat Robin's "harmless bits of fun" as merely humorous hey-nonny-nonny,
so the denouement is bound to be ambiguous and disturbing. Whether we feel that
Nancy treats Robin appropriately or too leniently, were forced to regard
the problem as more serious than comic, more so than anything in Lucky Jim yet
insufficiently resolved. I'm not satisfied that the ending of You Can't Do Both
does justice--imaginative or ethical--to the conflicts the novel raises and
Amis has long contemplated. For all his subtley, sophistication, and craft,
Amis never convincingly portrays crucial realms of human experience; that these
passions, longings, and sufferings are inhospitable to the comic muse makes
his effort to regard them all the more admirable and poignant.